…….adding snippets of information back into the story and taking a section that’s summarized and make it into a full-fledged scene. The snippets are back in, after a couple of tense hours of wrestling with phrasing and word placement. That was easy compared to what I now have to do with the summarized bit that needs to be a full on scene.
First, I had to print out the pages that contain all that summarizing. Why? Because it’s long enough that it actually requires its own scene. Therefore, it’s too long to remember it without hard copy to reference. Having a hard copy makes it easier to transform the summary into an active scene. I will most likely be writing this out in long-hand, in a hand dandy notebook that I keep in my backpack. I don’t like carrying my laptop around for something that I’ll most likely be spending more time thinking about than writing about.
It gets complicated.
How does it get complicated, you ask? It’s just a summarized form of the action, it should be easy to flesh out. You’ve got a pen, a notebook, the printed copy of the necessary pages. There are ideas swirling and creative juice going.
How is that complicated?
I’m glad you asked.
I still need to figure out who’s Point of View this is being told from. Is it the retired captain? The vagabond? The lovesick girl? The vampire in the basement? Professor Plum in the library with the knife?
So many questions……